I'm not in the market for pet food these days, but this sign seems a bit off to me:
It's a bit like the old science fiction short story by Damon Knight called "To Serve Man," if you get my drift.
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Friday, August 5, 2016
A Name that's Bad for the Pet Food Business
Posted at 7:35 PM
Categories: Honey--Get Me Rewrite
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It's "To Serve Man," not "Mankind."
That's what I get for rushing on a Saturday. Thanks, Carl. I've corrected it.
It might have been OK without the "gently cooked." The one thing that sort of saves it is that it's FreshPet, not fresh pet. The first is clearly not referring to a pet while the second is. :-)
I got good results after following the tipsIt's a bit like the old science fiction short story by Damon Knight called "To Serve Man," if you get my drift.Nice post of daughter number 3.
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