From the Star Tribune, April 27, 2008
[Headline] "Hot Under the Collar"
[Deck] "The conference room is too hot. The cube is too cold. And the battle over the thermostat wages in offices year-round."
Okay, so it's not horribly wrong, but shouldn't that be "rages in offices year-round" or "is waged in offices year-round"?
A battle can be waged by a human being or maybe even, in a metaphorical sense, by nature, but it can't wage all by itself, right?
Monday, April 28, 2008
Wage, Rage, What's the Difference?
Posted at 9:58 PM
Categories: Honey--Get Me Rewrite
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